Writing Dynamic Dialogue
Monica Cox
As a former video producer, my dialogue tends to read more like a script. While the pacing and content shine, the meaning I imbue in my head doesn’t always translate onto the page. I have had to learn to add more context, intentional body language, and narrative exposition to enhance my dialogue.
I’ve learned to use these five strategies to help.
1. THAD
In From Idea to Novel: Mastering the Process, Elizabeth George suggests the Talking Heads Avoidance Device, or THAD method. The idea is that characters in conversation with one another are doing something—a work task, eating, knitting, etc. These actions reveal things about the non-POV characters, add to the reader’s understanding of your POV character, and enhance the setting.


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